Formal Letter

 COMPOSITION 06

Formal letter asking for a loan

 

 

From: alvaro@gmail.com

To: bank@gmail.com

Dear Sir,

 

My name’s Álvaro and I’m an app designer. I am writing this e-mail to ask if I could have a loan. I would be pleased if I could have $100,000. Then, I could pay the money back. Each month, I would be able to return $2,000. Could you please tell me how much time and money the loan would cost, please?

 

I am developing an app that tells you where the best restaurants are. It will be a free app and everyone would be able to rate it and write comments about it. I need some money to start developing it.

 

I hope you have liked my idea and I look forward to your response.

 

Yours sincerely,

 

Álvaro.